I was going to call it "Baptism by Fire" or "Aquarius Ascending" .. as the Aquarius is a candle burning and the fish enters on the right dipped in the water of life as the melting wax represents the life that is lived experience gained .. the tempering of the soul .. and emerges a swan flying on the left .. reserected, awakened, enlightened
This image has a fear feeling behind it for me. There's something in it's design that I find uncomfortable. However, on the other hand, I suppose that would be a job will done for you. Nice clean lines! Good work.